Mar 11, 2007

you are my angel - end part!

Vidya: marriage...
Raj: huh??
Vidya: hehehe.. you heard that right!
Raj: wonderful, who is that lucky guy??
Vidya: ok listen...
Raj: tell, I'm listening...
Vidya: well, I'm in love with you..
Raj: Oh! wonderful, when did you realise that? yesterday?
Vidya: well, yes!
Raj: and....
Vidya: and I want to marry you..
RAj: great! OK tell me one thing, how well you know me?
Vidya: hmmm... I'm not sure... just that I want to marry you!
Raj: well well, there we are...

My curiosity levels raised to peak when I saw them talking. They were talking very softly, even moved my chair little towards them and not a single word I could hear.....

Sameera: Abey Avi-dude! are you able to hear them?
Me: Nah! tough luck you see...
Rachana: why don't you guys just sit enjoy the delicious food?
Lucky: Told ya guys, Rachana loves to eat, eat and eat...look who is worried of food when someting serious is going.. (he winked at us!)
Rachana: Yes! I love to eat, and by the way did I stop you from eating. First thing is, they are talking so softly that none of us are able to at least decipher their lip moments. So, the only thing we can now do is EAT! got that Mr.Lucky?
Lucky: Yes ma'am! I hold my ears...

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Vidya: ok leave it, you say, do you love me or not!
Raj: hmm... yes and no...
Vidya: Raj....???
Raj: Vidya, ok listen, just listen... Yes, I love you... but I guess we are not in so called true-love.... First of all, we know very little about each other...now we may feel everything is perfect but I guess we need to spend sometime together, know each other well. Ok, I will marry you, but what if after couple of years you realise that we took the wrong decision. This may result in breaking up... yes or no??
Vidya: hmm.... but...well yes...you are right!
Raj: Vidya, I do love you, but I know every little about you, I know your slam book likes and dislikes, but those answers might have changed by now...
Vidya: Ok, so what you want me to do??
Raj: Now you are on the right track... well, we'll spend some time together, let's see how comfortable we are in each other's company... and then if everything goes fine, you'll know the right time when we can marry... is that fine?
Vidya: ok sir!

Raj got up from his chair and sat next to Vidya. we had no clue why he got up and sat next to her, by the time we could take our eyes off them, Raj put his hands over hers and smiled.... I started whistling, Rachana quickly took the pic with her mobile cam...


P.S: Ok, so that's the end of yet another series of Indian Pie... lemme know how was the story, good, Ok kind, could have been much better.... Well, I tried my level best U see!..... [ ;)]
And thanks to contended and goofy, who indirectly helped me in this story... :D

7 comments:

  1. U ended realistically....practically the way it shld be.
    Thumbs up :D

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  2. Have to agree with Harish,nice ending.good to go slow with no regrets later.

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  3. thank god...no filmy ending...

    Nice end to a nice story...

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  4. super ending aviii....the flow was good..:)
    n very realistic indeed....
    keep rocking...n write more stories..:D

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  5. Hmmmmm is all I can say dude!! :))

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  6. Nice blog n even nicer narration of the story,
    Great wrk.

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